Wednesday, 22 October 2014

My wild ideas Springlily

W.A.L.T:To write a poem inspired by Ashleigh Young.


As my wild ideas drifted away,

     I  began to have a gaze,

      My wild ideas take me to places I       have never been,

My wild ideas are so creative ,

I begin to maple that all Im might turn to fable.

By Springlily.

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Spring-Lilly, I think I spotted some mistakes.... after your first sentence there is a huge gap that's as well as underneath. When you write, places I have, well there is a gap in between I and have. Besides that KA MAU TE WEHE.

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  2. Thanks kirihiria for commenting I will some how change that :)

    THANKS!!!

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