I am a Year 6 student at Kaikohe West School in Northland, NZ. I am in Room 4 and my teachers are Miss Smith and Miss Nicola.
Spring-Lily, you have such a clever imagination. You should write children's books because you have such a magical way of seeing things. You could use adverbs too if you want to get extra marks.
Yes miss nicola I have used adverbs in my writing
Hi Spring Lily! I love the way that you have a lot of descriptive words in your story. I can feel the lushy green leaves! They feel ticklish! I also agree with Mrs Nicola! Very good amagination! I love it! I have no improvements. Thats quiet good! Over all Thumbs up!!:) Nice job.
Thanks Hope you are the best:0