Wednesday, 20 August 2014

Moument recount Springlily

4 comments:

  1. Spring-Lily, you have such a clever imagination. You should write children's books because you have such a magical way of seeing things. You could use adverbs too if you want to get extra marks.

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  2. Yes miss nicola I have used adverbs in my writing

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  3. Hi Spring Lily! I love the way that you have a lot of descriptive words in your story. I can feel the lushy green leaves! They feel ticklish! I also agree with Mrs Nicola! Very good amagination! I love it! I have no improvements. Thats quiet good! Over all Thumbs up!!:) Nice job.

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